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Batman 3, (or 4?) ideas

I am trying to let David Goyer know this possibility for the next batman movie.
Here is my idea- spread it around- I don’t care if I get credit, I just want to see it happen (or something similar- so David Goyer can feel free to change any part he wants).  I realize some things will need to be changed to fit in with the likely brilliant ideas that he already has.
Also, forgive the bad punctuation and the generally bad writing style.  I thought it important to spend more time on story that the writing quality since it may never come to fruition.
Possible villains
black mask?
Hush
Man Bat?
Riddler
The Wrath
pix
Nicodemus
Jane Doe?
Gear Head?
If you don’t know who these are then check out
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Batman_villains
Story: 3 months after Dark Knight- and Wayne Manor is half completed and Bruce has moved back in.
The first half of the movie (which may have to be quite long, deals with building the storyline and the villains)
Give intro to Hush, incorporate as much of his story as you can into the film.

Hush comes back to Gotham in a time when Nicodemus and The Wrath (or man bat and the wrath) are both performing heinous crimes, and framing batman for them. (If nicodemus, not many people attribute his crimes to batman, as they do not fit his M.O.)

The employee who knows batman’s identity, lets call him john, (cause I forgot his name) has a wife or best friend who was killed by The Wrath (collateral damage, not a cop), and he believes as most do that it was batman. He goes somewhat mad with rage.
He is consistently questioned by the police who are now searching for batman, but he does not tell them what he knows because he wants revenge himself.
He goes to arkham, seeking advise from the joker (we only here his voice and see a small part of his face), who gets him worked up and confused as the joker would, and rids him of the doubts he has due to the fact that Batman once saved his life (he does not tell the joker it was Bruce). The joker also tells him he does not have what it takes to face batman, at least alone. He then provides him with a profound riddle that john becomes obsessed with.
Soon he goes into hiding and changes his name to Edward Nigma, forging papers.
Here we can return to batman for a while and his battle against being framed. He does go after nicodemus (who uses a flamethrower) first and is able to catch him and do battle. It ends with nicodemus nearly being beat to death and held between the closing ends of a draw bridge over the river. Batman finds out that he had been hired by the new mob boss from out of town (audience does not know, and may not find out that the boss is black mask, in fact they may suspect hush), batman tries to find out more but nicodemus sees a chance to torch batman and uses it, burning batman badly but causing nicodemus to be let go and fall. His fuel tank is caught between the closing bridges and we see a distant side shot of the bridges where it is observable that a human falls down toward the water just a second or two before a gigantic explosion. Batman, once hit by the flamethrower fell down/ rolled down the bridge. We then see Gordon and his partner eating doughnuts and listening to the scanner in their car at the base of the bridge, when batman falls on the hood of their car. They get freaked, and just a second later we zoom out to see the blast. Gordon leaps out of his car and pulls batman into the back seat as rubble is raining down. Gordon’s arm gets crushed by a piece of cement. Gordon still insists that he drive. Once all three are in the car he drives in a hurry to Wayne manner. His partner (Very young- and called officer Grayson) is demanding that they take him to the hospital under arrest. And when Gordon ignores and then refuses the request, telling him that “I know what I’m doing, I know more about this situation” his partner pulls a gun and explains that the batman killed his dad (a detective killed by the wrath) and demands he turn back. Gordon then decides to explain to him all he knows (except that Bruce is batman), even the evidence he has that batman did not kill his father- but says that under the false assumption that batman killed Harvey dent, no one would believe him.
After taking Bruce to the bat cave and doing what they can for his wounds (which are not too severe, but still pretty bad, and had knocked him out for a while- Bruce comes to and learns what happened, and insists that Officer Grayson stay at his place until all things are sorted out- it takes coaxing and eventually a paralytic agent to get him to stay. It is hard to administer it however, due to his martial arts training.
All the while though Edward has become increasingly ill and goes to a new doctor- Thomas Elliot.
In treating him for cancer Thomas Elliot (Hush) finds out about his patients own hatred for Bruce Wayne (but doesn’t learn why at this time) when Edward finds Thomas throwing darts in his office at a picture of Bruce and some news articles about him.
We leave them for now in the middle of a discussion of how to bring down Bruce Wayne.

We then move to pix. After showing how she became what she is now –including a bout with the police, the tale ends with Edward Nigma coming to her and making a proposition.
He brings her to Thomas’s house where Edward and Her are confronted while eating dinner by a man in facial wrappings. Pix is about to attack but Edward tells her to be calm. As the bandages come off we see that it is Bruce Wayne…or at least his look alike.
After taking a moment to take revel in the moment he pulls Edward aside and asks why she is here, saying that they don’t need her help.
Edward then reveals that no one has heard from Bruce Wayne in a couple days and that it is not going to be as easy as Hush may have expected to replace Wayne. He then offers a riddle, which Hush cannot figure out quick enough so Edward tells him- Bruce Wayne is batman. Hush is taken back and is angry that he was not told this before, he puts Edward in a headlock in a manner that would put batman to shame. Edward chokes out that he still needs him and the lady to occupy batman- hush reluctantly lets go. Edward explains that Bruce does not take on his alter ego as much now because the police are hunting him because he is a murderer, and that he and the lady, as well as ‘the wrath’ will be necessary to weaken and distract batman/ Bruce.
Hush chuckles a little and glares at Edward. “You are more expendable to me than you think”

We are then at the point when Bruce, while recovering at home and doing his best to discover who the wrath is, or who he will kill next, after the hunt continues and clever mind games are played with him- almost worthy of the joker- he receives a riddle (how, I can’t think of a cool clever way…)
It is signed “Wrath”
Once deciphered it leads batman to where he meets up against pix and an epic battle ensues-(clearly well planned by the riddler)- which includes some evasion and ambush during one of the periods of evasion it goes back to hush for the meeting and during a second it shows his actions at the mansion.

Meanwhile Hush has gone to a meeting as Bruce Wayne and then has gone back to the mansion.
Before Hush gets to the mansion (actually, as soon as Bruce leaves) we see officer Grayson at the computers doing research on the wrath and then makes a connection. He then finds the old batman suit and uses it, then leaves.
At the mansion Hush does his best to impersonate Wayne but Alfred sees through it. He tries to secretly get help but Hush discovers him and stops him, and shoots him.
He then searches for the bat cave and finds it and begins pulling up files on Wayne’s business and accounts etc.
We return to the battle between pix and batman (it is up to you how it ends- but she ends up injured and escapes).
We then come on Dick Grayson who finds The Wrath. This is the first time we actually see the wrath, as he steps out of the shadows. The Wrath complements him (thinking it is batman) on the murder of Harvey Dent, but he approaches menacingly and the wrath fights.
Grayson holds his own for a little while but soon begins to lose. The wrath recognizes that this is not the real batman when he has him pinned down and asks who he really is. At this point a black knife hits wrath in the side and pierces his suit. And Grayson kicks him off of him to see pix, who looks very surprised and confused, (they are all on a roof) She backs up a couple steps to the stairwell she came up and almost falls but catches herself, she then begins to create a gun aimed at Grayson, but he shoots an electric ‘bat chip’ at her, zapping her and causing her to fall down the stairs. Grayson then turns to wrath who tries to get up and attack him, but Grayson kicks him back down and holds bat blade to his throat. Wrath asks angrily, and in pain ‘who are you?’ Grayson then tilts his head and thinks for a second, then says in a vengeful tone- “nightwing” He then drops the knife quickly grabs the wraths head- struggles, then breaks his neck. He then gets up and we see him staring off into the distance. We then catch a view of pix’s wounds fixing themselves in the stairwell, and she opens her eyes.

Batman has meanwhile been searching from pix, but not being able to find her he returns to Wayne manner. Once the bat cave door opens hush eludes Wayne. Bruce finds Alfred upstairs and calls an ambulance right as he hears something from the bat cave; he comes down just in time to see himself driving off on the bat bike (Hush does not know he was seen). He quickly does a last check on Alfred and regretfully hops in… and chases after.

Hush gets back to his house as he sees pix stumbling up to the door. He gets off, walks up behind her and shoots her. He then goes in, and quickly reapplies his facial bandages. When he comes down to his basement lab he finds riddler, pouring over books on riddles. He sneaks up behind him and grabs him with a gun to his head. He drags him upstairs while yelling at him about his and pix failure. He struggles to stuff riddler into the fireplace and just as he is about to ignite it, batman jumps him.
Another epic battle ensues, batman is loosing. Nightwing joins in near the end but …something happens to him…(where the battle takes them); as batman is about to be killed, we hear a shotgun cock from behind, and we hear Aaron Eckhart’s voice “You know, its odd, when you put me in that- what did you call it…Lazarus pit, you didn’t think about the repercussions. Nor did you when you fixed my face and pumped me full of anti psychotics and anti depressants. We then see Harvey Dent behind him. Hush turns to face him.
“He is still your enemy- he killed your fiancée and you owe” Bang! Hush is shot in the chest and falls stumbles of the bridge.
And you can figure out the rest.

November 13, 2008 - Posted by mattlocke2 | Batman, Dark Knight, David Goyer, Movies | , , , , | No Comments Yet

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